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how help't me with the spellings.
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The text is a little difficult to read though, and probably needs a minor revision. The phasing could be shorter - and easier to fit in the space you've got - in places, and there are a couple words or phases that would be easier to understand if a minor substitution was made, or got replaced with a very similar correctly spelled word that means something different ('Agents' instead of 'Against', although I think I saw another on my first readthrough). It's not a big fuss, it's just a kind of thing that's irritating to spot unless you're constantly using the language. (Trust me, the vast majority of native English speakers mess up to vs. too, your vs. you're and it's vs. its, so you're doing really well all things considered.)
I'd love to help with that for you, if you don't mind too terribly...
yeah finally^^
thats good to hear